I remember when, it rained
on sunny days in the tropics,
Lush, bright, humid, steamy
It was like,
Invoking avidity for emotions
A poetic ecstasy
Let’s call it, orgasmic
Of the house three doors down…
Two doors…
Next door…
Haaa… I could only bite my lip and release
the muscles tensed inside me as
It hit my open aired shelter
Listening, was the equivalent to a massage
Utterly uplifting, relaxing
To listen to the shower’s raining lead,
pelting the zinc roof up top
Never loosening its intensity
Poured slowly, on top of the lean-to
Letting the silky slick drops, saturate my sodden skin,
On that sweaty summer evening
The downpour wouldn’t last ten minutes
Not nearly long enough even to raise the dust
from the dirt
Off the street
Let alone convert it to mud
But when it did stop
It just vanished, like an unfinished sentence. . .
Leaving everyone with this feeling of uncertainty
Glancing over their shoulders
As though they had lost something
1 comment:
Qoc'a, you have always had a gift for allowing a reader to taste what can usually only be felt, or feel what can only be heard and so forth. I still have the other poem you wrote last year at the workshop about the rain, and even though the subject matter is the same, it is a different aspect of it. After reading this, I can't wait until the next storm.
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